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Review Detail of Phoebus_Aphos in All Deities Horror

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So Rn, we only got bout 16 chaps, so here is a review as of now, the Author is as one can see an newbie in an literal sense but unlike with other works here on WN, here we actualy follow nor only the Story but also the Author as he gets better which i find while many for sure are against this, rather nice.For the novel itself, the author is rushing parts, but after chapter 10, i feel like he is starting to slow down.The Characters are also Interesting, my Favorite being Adrian who seems more like an cheat Character then anyone else which is another suprising thing, as i did not expect the Author to make an Character who while part of the Maincast, he is not the Mc more of a Cheat then the Mc himself.All around, i recommend this novel, as i believe it has potential, but we will see how it progresses.

All Deities Horror

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is what you mean bro isn't even the main character

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Lucian is still the Mc, but, as a newbie, I might have gone overboard with power and pacing. No worries, though—I'm fixing it in the rewrite. Gotta make sure readers enjoy a smoother ride this time around. Learning from my genius, you know?

Dread_doc:is what you mean bro isn't even the main character