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Redex10hCommentedThe full stop should be inside the “”
"Hmm! Okay. That at least removes the Genjutsu option. Although, there was a low probability of a Genjutsu lasting this long. I'm still satisfied that we ran this test". Said Harumi with a mix of relief and curiosity.- Redex10hCommented
Pretty good saying
1. Avoid the trucks and buses. Stay far away. If it is not the truck kun, it is the bus kun. - Redex10hCommented
“No way man” Should not have a full stop, instead, a comma would be better.
Now, you are probably imagining that having left in such a hurry, I was in a rush to get to the bus stop. No way man. Too much influence from the light novels had ingrained a lesson deep into me. - Redex3dReplied to Nezuko_Kamadoe
2800*
2019, May 20th, Monday. - Redex5dCommented
“And that’s how you came to be”
"Mommy, I want a little sister from mommy and daddy. Go and make one for me!" the little one demanded and then winked to his dad who was standing behind him. - Redex5dCommented
Bro stopped with the rather 😭 it isn’t needed.
Rather, I couldn't. - Redex6dReplied to Hardy1j
You could explain that it’s a FPP a bit earlier so that it’s easier to understand what perspective it is. For example “And I was among one of those spectors, hopeless.” This was from a few paragraphs back. If you do that then you won’t have to bother with a transition.
I too wasn't in my top shape, after the incessant battles. - Redex6dReplied to Lazy_Pen_Master
Wait, Lazy? The hell you doing here?
Whoever the figure was, they were absurdly strong, unparalleled even. - Redex6dReplied to
Nah, it’s fine as it is
Whoever the figure was, they were absurdly strong, unparalleled even. - Redex8dCommented
So basically clash of clans & rise of kingdoms?
"Moving on to Clash of Civilisations, every candidate for the Primordial Seed has the same goal, to become the World God and to do that you have to gain full control of Genesis, which means that clashes are inevitable. When a Clash of Civilisations occurs, the faith level of each side will grant them enhancements, a higher faith level with result in a higher enhancement. But that's not the end, once a Clash of Civilisations ends, a Clash of Gods will occur" - Redex8dCommented
So… it’s basically a loading screen?
Although very little time had passed since he activated the technique, the devil felt boredom creep in. The initial excitement he felt had been ruined by the lack of connection with any of the Mortal Worlds he had seen so far. - Redex8dReplied to Okojus
Agreed
Such an enhancement was not be underestimated. The best way to understand the effect of the universe's adjustment is to know how much of each God Essence was needed to kill a Supreme Mage. A basketball-sized bundle of Divine Essence is enough to kill a Supreme Mage, whereas only a tennis-ball-sized bundle of Devil Essence could kill a Supreme Mage. - Redex8dCommented
Sigh, another author thinking that I’m going to remember this shi
Gods: - Redex1mthCommentedHe was called mad saber, and even he himself was afraid of his angry self. But even then, he was really no match for Seven!
- Redex1mthCommented
Do you have a discord server? If so, can you invite me?
This book has been deleted. - Redex1mthCommented
Author wilding rn
'It indeed was good enough to lose my mind.' Luttrena sighed before firming her thoughts, 'Fine, so be it. I'll bear a child. I'll become an adult soon enough anyway. I can handle childbirth.' - Redex1mthCommented
… that’s one hell of a Intro for a chapter
"Hah…haaah…Virala…stop…go slower…!" Luttrena panted as she joined bodies with Virala at a stall in the corner. A shutter had been pulled up as a barricade to prevent them from being heard by the others. Moreover, they chose a time when all the crowd in the outer ring had converged around Inala's stall. - Redex1mthCommented
Then it’s not impossible, is it?
If the Pranic Beast was a mutant, they also gained a Secondary Nature. But, getting a Tertiary Nature was impossible. Only a handful of cultivators had that in Sumatra Chronicles, and all of them were powerhouses among powerhouses. - Redex3mthReplied to Meowder
Ohhh, okay, thanks for the clarification.
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