Review Detail of Ani_On_Fire in Villain: Girlfriend Thief
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Lovely Shameless Author speaking!If I had to say one bad thing about this novel, it would be that it lacks an action tag.Cuz boy, there sure is a lot of ACTION.Anyway, it's a pretty DEEP story and I plan to make this one LONG (no hidden meanings).The text is simple but if you have ANY queries,Just ask me in the comments!Enjoy the DEEP, LONG ACTION.Lovely shameless author signing off!ps- Adam's (Alan) Adventures will be updated consistently with ATLEAST 1 ch/day.
Villain: Girlfriend Thief
Ani_On_Fire
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After the chapter- 'Character Development'. It gets better. However, this story is about a fool who will upturn the Heavens by wantonly stealing celestial women. So, his reputation as a fool is necessary for him to deceive his 'smart' enemies. But yeah, he does get pretty smart later on in the story.
Ironrooster36:Hey, Author? From what I can see so far (chapter 3) Alan seems a bit.... lacking in the whole brain compartment. Does that get better?
The story is set in a medieval setting, so yuri is frowned upon.As for ntr, only Adam will be having the fun ;)
Sabaroth_zarkiel:Hello author I wanted to know if there is ntr (netorare or netrase) or Yuri in this novel ?
There will be proper romantic progression with EVERY heroine.I don't like to write a character for 'plot' and then never have them be involved again in the actual plot.Mind break will only be a part of the story as plot armor and to help Adam out when he's in a pickle.
FallenAngeI:What is the Mind Break tag for? Will there be romanctic progression or will the MC just mind break the FLs?
I like Villain MC but not the scum who doesnt care about his people or household and not the one who doesnt know how to keep the boundary beetwen master and servant like some japanese BETA MC..."just saying"đ .......so, is he a Villain or a goody to shoes HERO?.......I am asking because I don't see "VILLAIN" tag and many Authors use it as an excuse to make the MC's acting like a goody to shoes hero when they literally put "VILLAIN" title on their Novel without the "tag"...hope you understand what I mean...đ
Ani_On_Fire:There will be proper romantic progression with EVERY heroine.I don't like to write a character for 'plot' and then never have them be involved again in the actual plot.Mind break will only be a part of the story as plot armor and to help Adam out when he's in a pickle.
RiLi88:I like Villain MC but not the scum who doesnt care about his people or household and not the one who doesnt know how to keep the boundary beetwen master and servant like some japanese BETA MC..."just saying"đ .......so, is he a Villain or a goody to shoes HERO?.......I am asking because I don't see "VILLAIN" tag and many Authors use it as an excuse to make the MC's acting like a goody to shoes hero when they literally put "VILLAIN" title on their Novel without the "tag"...hope you understand what I mean...đimage
The villain tag is not there because Alan doesn't know what being a villain means.Is he a goody two shoes hero? Just read the first chapter, and you'll get your answer.Does he act like a jerk, and will readers dislike him? That is subjective, but I will only say that this story is NOT about a Hero.Finally, is he stupid? As an author, I believe in character development and reader satisfaction, so I won't give my fans many chances to complain.
RiLi88:I like Villain MC but not the scum who doesnt care about his people or household and not the one who doesnt know how to keep the boundary beetwen master and servant like some japanese BETA MC..."just saying"đ .......so, is he a Villain or a goody to shoes HERO?.......I am asking because I don't see "VILLAIN" tag and many Authors use it as an excuse to make the MC's acting like a goody to shoes hero when they literally put "VILLAIN" title on their Novel without the "tag"...hope you understand what I mean...đimage
Ani_On_Fire:The villain tag is not there because Alan doesn't know what being a villain means.Is he a goody two shoes hero? Just read the first chapter, and you'll get your answer.Does he act like a jerk, and will readers dislike him? That is subjective, but I will only say that this story is NOT about a Hero.Finally, is he stupid? As an author, I believe in character development and reader satisfaction, so I won't give my fans many chances to complain.
Ani_On_Fire:The villain tag is not there because Alan doesn't know what being a villain means.Is he a goody two shoes hero? Just read the first chapter, and you'll get your answer.Does he act like a jerk, and will readers dislike him? That is subjective, but I will only say that this story is NOT about a Hero.Finally, is he stupid? As an author, I believe in character development and reader satisfaction, so I won't give my fans many chances to complain.
Ani_On_Fire:Yeah, WN doesn't quite like it, apparently, but no worries, the story will have what was promised.
Oh thank God, that helps greatly. Him 'acting'/playing his role as a fool is significantly better than him being the dumbest person from Idiocracy.
Ani_On_Fire:After the chapter- 'Character Development'. It gets better. However, this story is about a fool who will upturn the Heavens by wantonly stealing celestial women. So, his reputation as a fool is necessary for him to deceive his 'smart' enemies. But yeah, he does get pretty smart later on in the story.