Review Detail of Blake_Silver in Oh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!
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I really enjoy this story. I really like the focus on small details which is rare in most fanfics and I feel like it really adds to the experience. The main character’s personality is very interesting to say the least(he’s kinda crazy), but it makes it fun. Sadly I have a few problems with the MC he’s got a grimoire and just forgot to use it, or how he’s been putting off just delivering a letter when it wouldn’t take much to do it fast and avoid syr, and just our lack of information about him, which is fine because I think it’ll get developed later in the story but for now… yeah. Other than that I just want more chapters.
Oh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!
RikuKage
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Thank you for such a wonderful thought-out review. I appreciate all the feedback. in regards to the grimoire. he's just trying to first cover his bases of what skills and magic he already has. Because after he uses the grimoire, that's it. He knows by watching Bell that he's going to be asked questions in regards to what kind of magic he wants. It's still random, but he's trying to figure out what best type of magic he wants or desires that will go well with his current Magic and what type of build he's trying to go for. so he's not trying to rush it. he was focusing on figuring out all the uses of his current magic and what it lacks, so he knows what the focus is on when he uses the grimoire.