Review Detail of Patrik_Crown in Adversaries

Only 3 chaps out there so I can't comprehend a solid review. Still, I'll try my best. Stability, I don't need to comment on that, same problems as I have :D Writing Quality is lacking in some spots, but with editing it can be fixed in no time. Development of the Character, Story, and the World is quite interesting for me, not gonna lie. Overall, a good story if you decide to give it a second chance...