This novel is just authors bashing, nothing makes sense. Not a single character is behaving not even close to their personality. The power-ups are meaningless, and makes 0 sense. Its just a fast paced, 0 plot wish fullfilling rushed draft. Author is traying to make a BAMF Jon Snow, but all he managed is a angry bull, with 0 control. Dialogue is vague, fake and dry. No emotions are felt, despite the CAPS, that is not how you create emotions. The number of things wrong here, is endless.
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LIKEGreat author, his other stories are good reads as well. What's gonna be your next story? Can you do tvd & originals? If possible?
The3Entities:Clearly! Trust this person 100% right , absolutely everything in this story is mediocreimage
For now, I hope to finish the current stories, but how crazy i am , I'm working on a story with a fusion of the RDR2/TVD universes
Blood_Sage:Great author, his other stories are good reads as well. What's gonna be your next story? Can you do tvd & originals? If possible?
The3Entities:Clearly! Trust this person 100% right , absolutely everything in this story is mediocreimage