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m3gah1tss
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This novel is just authors bashing, nothing makes sense. Not a single character is behaving not even close to their personality. The power-ups are meaningless, and makes 0 sense. Its just a fast paced, 0 plot wish fullfilling rushed draft. Author is traying to make a BAMF Jon Snow, but all he managed is a angry bull, with 0 control. Dialogue is vague, fake and dry. No emotions are felt, despite the CAPS, that is not how you create emotions. The number of things wrong here, is endless.

Game of Thrones : Nano Machines

The3Entities

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Blood_Sage
Blood_SageLv5Blood_Sage

Great author, his other stories are good reads as well. What's gonna be your next story? Can you do tvd & originals? If possible?

The3Entities:Clearly! Trust this person 100% right , absolutely everything in this story is mediocre
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The3Entities
The3EntitiesAuthorThe3Entities

Oh ! Thank you for your honesty, bye 😁

DetachedDreamer
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Sounds like a terrible story. great review!

The3Entities:Oh ! Thank you for your honesty, bye 😁
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The3Entities
The3EntitiesAuthorThe3Entities

Clearly! Trust this person 100% right , absolutely everything in this story is mediocre

DetachedDreamer:Sounds like a terrible story. great review!
The3Entities
The3EntitiesAuthorThe3Entities

For now, I hope to finish the current stories, but how crazy i am , I'm working on a story with a fusion of the RDR2/TVD universes

Blood_Sage:Great author, his other stories are good reads as well. What's gonna be your next story? Can you do tvd & originals? If possible?
GeeGeeTeeWuu
GeeGeeTeeWuuLv13GeeGeeTeeWuu

I'll take your word for it. I'll leave while I have no feeling to this story.

Xiaoyunyun
XiaoyunyunLv2Xiaoyunyun

I am gonna trust this guy.

The3Entities:Clearly! Trust this person 100% right , absolutely everything in this story is mediocre
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