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ScriptGamer
ScriptGamerLv27mthScriptGamer

The start is good, I've read the first chapter only and the story already goes darkening. Though I suggest to describe more inner feelings or dialogue for the mc, it would add more colors to the story.

Chains of Destiny

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thanks, I will put that into setup