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Review Detail of InfiniteZer0 in Awakening: I have a Game Panel with Recovery(unique)

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(Reviewed at chapter 37- currently caught up with released chapters) It is not a bad story, but there are a lot of things I think could be better. Starting with a small matter that I found annoying and moving on from there.1. There is not one time I have seen the mc think to himself. He always mutters or whispers to himself, and no one acknowledges him talking to himself even though they also have enhanced senses from becoming black iron (or higher). It really irritates me how frequently it happens.2. For such an 'evil' organization, they seem to have a lot of really great and generous perks and a pleasant city to accompany that. Not to mention the stict no policies about preventing infighting among their members, great restaurants with eye-catching staff, and the great facilities provided to all members based on contributions. It feels like the author has to remind you pretty often that they are 'evil' with a rather off handed remark. Sure, they used a parasite to force awaken the mc, but that is a really prestigious position for an individual. Sure the parasite could in theory be used to take control of the mc, but they have not even tried to yet (and he could get around the issue and even reverse it extreamly easily with a bit of time if he wanted to - which should have been his first priority if they were really as bad as they were made out to be). 3. Power levels like iron, bronze, and silver and grades like common, elite, ext. (mostly seen through plants, so it might be a bit skewed) seem to be pointless and arbitrary. He is capable of improving plants to above his level pretty much instantly, and it does not really have any repercussions. It only takes like a day, and he can do it to 3 plants.4. It feels like every time the author thinks of something cool, he wants to give it to the mc. He always is giving it to the mc instead of letting the mc earn it. Frankly, he seems overpowered for his level already, and this does not help the issue of the power levels being meaningless. And this is while he is under equipped and broke.5. I find how his team was arranged extremely awkward. The super evil organization (that is shown to be highly meticulous and efficient) decided, "Hey, you guys barely know anyone else here, but groups will be arranged based on how you guys feel. We trust you and care about your feelings." It would have been more rational to have them assigned based on people who are roomed close together to allow for more efficient communication for teams and allow the meticulousness of the organization to adjust combat groups to be balanced.6. This is kind of an idea to reign in the speed of the mc to a more reasonable - but still powerful - if the author decides to rewrite anything. It would be better to make his only gain the recovery either when he sleeps or when he meditates. He is getting way too much recovery passively, which makes him grow too fast for a well paced story.

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