Reviewing at chapter 30 (current up to date). Overall, it is a decent story so far. There are a few weird parts about the development that seem strange or really important but are passed over or skipped. Especially with the whole Eve thing (you will get what I mean pretty early on). I feel like it is still early enough to where these can still be answered, but seem weird and out of place instead of mysterious or intriguing, like I suspect the author is trying for.Also, I do not like that the mc seems to be going out of his way to make people hate him, which is making things unnecessarily complicated for him. I do not mind the carefree attitude, the fast talking approach, or the thrill he seems to be getting out of challenges, but he seems to be going out of his way to make things more difficult
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