Review Detail of James_Horn in Game Of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan

Item: Game Of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

James_HornLv48mthJames_Horn

I find it funny that you think your grammar was better then the original author

Game Of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan

Olsenu

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yoooooooooooLv5yooooooooooo

Dude don't be an ass. If you don't like his grammar that's ok but don't insult anyone.

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OlsenuAuthorOlsenu

"I find it funny that you think your grammar is better than that of the original author." No, but I think I can help you with your grammar.

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Laziness_IsThe_KeyLv5Laziness_IsThe_Key

Olsenu:"I find it funny that you think your grammar is better than that of the original author." No, but I think I can help you with your grammar.

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hyperlevinLv3hyperlevin

What are the mistakes here

Olsenu:"I find it funny that you think your grammar is better than that of the original author." No, but I think I can help you with your grammar.

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nilbog_the_greedyLv4nilbog_the_greedy

I agree, grammar is still pretty busted. it's hard to tell what the people are talking about let alone who's speaking to who. I find myself rereading the same sentence/paragraph three or four times and still being greatly confused.

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