Laziness_IsThe_Key
Rule No.1: ALWAYS CONFIRM THE UNIVERSE If given a Wish... ALWAYS WISH FOR OMNIPOTENCE FIRST... THEN OMNI-MANIPULATION
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Dude....I ain't reading this big para but i understand
What u said made no sense with what he said
The convo is....strange...
I don't like Harry trusting Lily like this. Just think it like Lily saved and he trusts her more there are so many things he should have thought with his intellect. Forced imo
this feels kinda forced coz he is smart enough to know she didn't do this for nothing
yes u can. write a compelling story
It's actually how you use his powers...like instead of going to wessex u can go somewhere else travel and create a name for him and more let's see but brida is bekar really
let's just skip brida as a harem member thyri too
not a fan of brida
Everything was fine till the latest chapters 33 and 34. Dude has millions of gold that he will get access on maturity but has complete excess to his mums's vault that hve 400k gold so he Asks GOBLINS to invest it all in ventures keep in mind he does not have future knowledge. Goblins take 15percent of the profit MC offers 20percent, 5percent as an incentive. He wants to invest in muggle side which i don't should be possible as there has to law or rule that makes it so muggle mony like that is not worth it. He is not a businessman or investors but this is dumb things like this tell a lot of what type of fanfiction this is going to be.
Dont't drop this but i am all for FB ff
I was hoping for this but TLK was like 800AC something so either it's too late or very late
or his control is slipping coz of mental fatigue
Thast's coz u made the main villain a nice dude not much to write about
Theres a difference between revenge and being a monster on live TV
Jaa apni maa ko bol vo expert h
2020?
this answers my question