Review Detail of Natsupatsu in I Play Football With A System

Item: I Play Football With A System
Rating: 2.8

Review detail

NatsupatsuLv126mthNatsupatsu

at the start, I really liked this story, but after a lackluster story development and a shoddy update, stability I might drop this story.

I Play Football With A System

Heavenmonarch_

Liked by 3 people

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Heavenmonarch_AuthorHeavenmonarch_

Could you elaborate more about the lackluster story development

2mth

RegalObscureLv3RegalObscure

Your pacing is horrible, dialogue is made by AI, romance is absolute atrocious. MC is unlikeable and his family dynamics is forced and robot like. Your jokes falls flat on delivery.

1mth