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Review Detail of Kira_Kazuto_4040 in Yes sir! I collect Yandere Milf

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Kira_Kazuto_4040
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Okay, I will be honest here, This author has a lot of experience in writing good Yandere stories from what I have seen so far. You see Yandere and the sci-fi genre are my cup of tea so I look for them wherever they pop up. Even the least popular ones are in my collection. So when I saw the author decided to write another Yandere story I got excited, and can't wait to see where the direction of this story will go.And Honestly speaking I don't write reviews unless I find the concept somewhat interesting. But let me just lay out the pros and the cons. I will start with the cons. . Light Grammar mistakes! . Two-faced Mc with the excuse of his personality change being put on his race change. . Update once a day (understandable). I believe that the author is a sadist given how dark this Mc mental train of thought is, then and again Xander from MSITMIAY (His Other Work) is far worse but he is excused because he is Yandere. . Lack of explanation of why the apocalypse even started. . Some scenes will leave you confused till the very end of the branch. . The world is not fledge out completely leaving me a little lost. Now unto the pros. Pros. . Compared to some novels on this site with trash quality, the English in this piece is superb, not perfect but better than most. . Yandere who doesn't like them? . The chapter is long and very descriptive. . Unique system, to be honest, I can't call what he has a system but it's a welcome change in my opinion. . Overpowered Mc and Villian downright, proven that Mc isn't the strongest and if he messes up in the slightest it is Game over for him. . Devious and Semi-Evil Mc (Acquired taste). DND player's wet dream, guilty as charge lol, but the author seems to avoid Cliche like some of the races are nostalgic for me. . No level-up bullshit and confusing EXP gain, thank God I use to love these but I know it ruins the story if not done by someone with actual exp in the field of LITRPG. . Mc has to use imagination and creativity to master his powers. . Harem Romance (Guilty pleasure). No Yuri base one author reply in the reviews (Acquired taste) although I would have liked it. But each to their own. All in all, it's an amazing story although it has a few noticeable plot holes in my opinion which the author can still fix. Conclusion. From what I have seen and read from this author over the months till now, can say he is the type that makes fast-paced, action pack stories with good premises and good romances, and again I would say give him twenty to thirty more chapters and the world and the story will truly come together. SO LET THE AUTHOR COOK!!!

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Yes sir! I collect Yandere Milf

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