Review Detail of Yash_Shah_7482 in I Am Tony Stark Now
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Dude. I don't dislike harems. I love them. You however are fixated on them to the extent your brain turned off after reading the word =harem=, read the rest of my review (just 4 more words). The plot and writing is bad. Like in the first chapter itself, the MC begs his father that he doesn't want to make weapons. Fine...Okay. Then dady goes, well might as well sell my shares in the company as well. Like what's the logic? There were 10000 more ways SITOny could have gone about making his own company, rather than that convoluted mess. But still fine, i was fine with that. Then in the next chp, he starts his company and then makes a fresh out of college SECRETARY with no qualifications, experience or contacts the CEO of the company he begged and bitched his daddy to open for him in the previous chapter. While acting like a bratty karen!!! My god I wanted to kill the author at that point for pushing the coolness of IRON MAN in the negative. Then in the next chapter when pepper is introduced, she just monologues, basically - Oh I love tony. Oh tony made me the CEO. Oh tony told me he will have other women in his harem but I am fine with it. At that point i just called it quits to my self torture and just dumped the story and left the review. And as far as your whining about me dishing the harem (my "Brainless Harem" comment) even though there isn't a harem yet.... Plot summary. Story Tags. First 3 chapters.
i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.
There is difference between having harem in a novel and having a bad harem novel. He is not talking about the fact that the novel has an harem, but how bad it is made
XtrEEm:i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.
Yes that is true except that the review was made before the harem was even made. Like I would understand if the review was made when there are like 80-100 chapters but the review was made when the romance was just pepper. There was no base to call it brainless. At that point saying that harems are bad whether it’s a fic or real life just cuz it is a harem is brainless. Like some cultures allow ut. And to deny it is wrong. Also in those culture all party’s have to agree to it
Space_Fox:There is difference between having harem in a novel and having a bad harem novel. He is not talking about the fact that the novel has an harem, but how bad it is made
XtrEEm:Yes that is true except that the review was made before the harem was even made. Like I would understand if the review was made when there are like 80-100 chapters but the review was made when the romance was just pepper. There was no base to call it brainless. At that point saying that harems are bad whether it’s a fic or real life just cuz it is a harem is brainless. Like some cultures allow ut. And to deny it is wrong. Also in those culture all party’s have to agree to it
Meta essence gacha is the only one I can name off the top of my head but there was also spider man from ashes_
camero:tell me 3 story that you read where the harem was actually good
The harem in this book is bad becauss instead of the romance happening organically the MC has a list of women he wants in his harem and when carol had to somehow accept being in a harem the author got lazy and made it happen of screen.
XtrEEm:i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.
Zed1_Eren_:it's a fic about Tony so it's meaningless to say the Harem is bad ( and who hate Harem are just ..... let it be I can't say)
dude do you truly belive harems are realistic and found in today's society? If you think harems are 'realistic' boy do I have a story to tell you about this flat earth we live on.
XtrEEm:i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.
in modern western society ya no its unrealistic. But in other countries and other cultures, yeah, its realistic.
THIZZGATOR:dude do you truly belive harems are realistic and found in today's society? If you think harems are 'realistic' boy do I have a story to tell you about this flat earth we live on.
that's a very very small minority and is usually backed up by backwards ideologies that oppress women.
XtrEEm:in modern western society ya no its unrealistic. But in other countries and other cultures, yeah, its realistic.
SERBMADHAUS:harem in my writing is decent. don't mean to toot my own horn but my readers love it.image
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camero:tell me 3 story that you read where the harem was actually good
