chps# (my auto correct is a deviant)

thx for the chapter. so, I know I am going to hate myself for saying this, especially since I very vocally told you to focus on this story and not the new one. I regrettably also told you a female mc wouldn't work. but I binged your new story. and I have to say it is awesome. to an extent I feel it's even better than this one. so I humbly request for a new chapter of your new story. also I remember you shared your UPI id a while back in case someone wanted to support your writing. I am considering it, are there any benefits like advanced chod?

okay. i will admit i was wrong. this story is good

female mc maza nai ayega

make it an OC as rahuls younger brother. but better not to do it altogether

usually i like ur stories . but the grammar here is simply unbearable. please use chat gpt to correct grammar b4 posting. dropped for now.

usually i like ur stories . but the grammar here is simply unbearable. please use chat gpt to correct grammar b4 posting. dropped for now.

Yaaaaaaaaaaaa

this story is awesome and an absolute laugh riot. especially the burb at the end. grammar is also perfect.

good one

Thanks for the chapter, please try to update regularly

Shouldn't it be pounds since he is in uk

Love your story. It's awesome. Always awaiting new chapters

Lupin is the serial killer. He is using werewolf animagus like transformation to get past pureblood wards

When i read the last part, It felt like a typical south indian movie Segway for the hero's entry

Your stories are shit as well

Dude.... Love ur story but ur chaps are sooooo shot. I m going to stop reading and let the chps pile up for a month.

Loved it. Very interesting. Though wish chps were a bit longer.

The title of this chapter !!!!!

Don't drop itt