Review Detail of SPBasilio in Hashashin: The Mage Hunters

I've read the first chapter which is sadly the only chapter available as of yet, but I can definitely tell, that the Author is good, the characters does not talk like cardboard boxes and the conversations moves swiftly. My only complaint is that the chapter is too long for a webnovel, which I think could possibly turn off a few readers so I recommend reducing the word length of each chapters to 1-1.5k which is usually the norm, but overall I think its good!