Review Detail of KingRetto in Lust System: Monster girl Harem
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you built the best background for the worst mc ,this mc is already dead he is saying he is not interested in banging chick because he gave up all leisure of life before dying in his last life and when system say if dont complete the task he will die this dimwit of mc got scared , if you are not interested and already give up on life then just go and die instead of him i think system guide would be a better mc , or a mc who wants to be strongest while banging chick that would be a perfect mc all i can say author you made the best world background with magic , adventres and whole which can be a place for an academy arc afterwards but because of mc i am droping it at ch 17 atleast make make an mc that take advsntage of world he is in or smart mc or even an dadptable mc would have been fine 💢 😡 💢
Lust System: Monster girl Harem
Crimson_Blue
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Sam0207:The readers will NEVER be completely happy no matter what. Take the really constructive criticism and ignore the rest. It's just demotivating and emotionally draining.image
Before giving a review maybe you should have read more than 17 chapters, I'll admit I did make the mc a little dumb at first since this is my first time writing harem, but it gets really better, the mc is now making better decisions and taking full advantage of his system and the world he's in, so maybe you should read all the free chapters before deciding to drop or not, but thanks for the review.
Crimson_Blue:Before giving a review maybe you should have read more than 17 chapters, I'll admit I did make the mc a little dumb at first since this is my first time writing harem, but it gets really better, the mc is now making better decisions and taking full advantage of his system and the world he's in, so maybe you should read all the free chapters before deciding to drop or not, but thanks for the review.
No, what I meant what that, you should read all the free chapters, then if you don't like the book, don't pay for the chapters, it's that simple.
DoMinOOZ:its like saying read 90% then it will get better. WHY SHOULD I WASTE MY TIME TO READ 90%
No, what I meant what that, you should read all the free chapters, then if you don't like the book, don't pay for the chapters, it's that simple.
DoMinOOZ:its like saying read 90% then it will get better. WHY SHOULD I WASTE MY TIME TO READ 90%
The readers will NEVER be completely happy no matter what. Take the really constructive criticism and ignore the rest. It's just demotivating and emotionally draining.
Crimson_Blue:No, what I meant what that, you should read all the free chapters, then if you don't like the book, don't pay for the chapters, it's that simple.