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i liked the concept of the story... translation is also fine... plot created by author is fresh and sufficiently developed ... but story takes u-turn around 70-80 chapters.... initial chapters promised a MC who's weak and has to raise affection and depend on his golden finger to survive while also maintaining facade of being demon lord.... But around 70-80 chapter, he starts to think and act like demon lord, becomes OP and rarely needs the system's help, situations becomes less funny and more generic/repetitive... While it is expected that he becomes OP and merge with demon lord persona, it happens way too early and seems rushed... overall, it was good but could have been better IMHO...

My Female Disciples All Have Sinister Intentions

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