He's... Silent. This is what really ruined the story. This is someone who has just been released into a new world, nervous and panicked, he should have had some outside monologue. He has no charm, it's supposed to be a streaming and his conversation with Red is bland, she just asks him questions. He doesn't take any initiative, he should have been nervous and therefore talk about what he sees, discussing conspiracy theories out loud. Frankly, there are a lot of streamers. 10 minutes on YouTube and the author would have the best and best streamer in the world. It's a shame.
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LIKEMonarch_Lord:bro is telling the author to make the mc seem like a naive fool.. dont listen to him.