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Little_El
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He's... Silent. This is what really ruined the story. This is someone who has just been released into a new world, nervous and panicked, he should have had some outside monologue. He has no charm, it's supposed to be a streaming and his conversation with Red is bland, she just asks him questions. He doesn't take any initiative, he should have been nervous and therefore talk about what he sees, discussing conspiracy theories out loud. Frankly, there are a lot of streamers. 10 minutes on YouTube and the author would have the best and best streamer in the world. It's a shame.

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Streamer in the Omniverse

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GrimReeFer
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"nervous and panicked" and you want him outwardly shouting about his emotions like some annoying YouTube streamer? 😂

Cha_D_Bear
Cha_D_BearLv4Cha_D_Bear

stupid ≠ not showing emotions

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Monarch_Lord
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fr

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Monarch_Lord
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bro is telling the author to make the mc seem like a naive fool.. dont listen to him.

UnderChain
UnderChainLv11UnderChain

Thanks for the comment, I hate MCs who do all these things like a stupid character, so I'm going to give this story a chance

Sky_TheEnder132
Sky_TheEnder132Lv14Sky_TheEnder132

ik what you feels. but bro, it starting to get better! A LOT BETTER that this fic become a masterpiece on it's own.

Jorah26252
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Do you not know what naive means? How is showing emotions naive?

Monarch_Lord:bro is telling the author to make the mc seem like a naive fool.. dont listen to him.