Review Detail of Carteluo in The Seduction System

Good writing, not a lot of redundant information, the progression is natural, not rushed in the plot. My only complaints is that it goes too direct, Lilith proposes something very open-ended and expands the plot to a lot of variety. But her direct focus on her mother, without mulling over possibilities other than her mother, takes a bit out of the immersion. For the author, you may not want to focus on other women for now, but you have to leave certain groundwork, to anticipate and expand the plot, a couple of lines is enough. So far of this review I'm going for chapter 21 moment I like it and I have FAITH in it.