Review Detail of Hezekiah_Lindsey in Dark Magus Returns

you lost the bet.

you should have given suggestions on how to improve the book. But instead... you call it bad and leave... can you write a novel?

ahh sorry i was just texting you.the problems are mostly show dont tell which is literally so easy to fix. like read any book that shows u how to properly show and evoke description and the dialogue too it's too long and feels off ya gotta shorten it and make it more realistic. thats it. cold have been a really cool novel from it's concept

Whoa hold on buddy, I don't need to be cook to criticize food. You are coming on way too aggressively. And he's correct, if you know how to use internet, you can find history of this author deleting low rating comments and spewing hate comments on readers. Unless of course you are one of his alt's or his editor's ....

I'm an author. And sorry my words came out aggressive, I just like the work

please read my new novel "The end of world has not yet begun, the system is activated in advance"

the dialogue is to long? to me it just sounds like ur lazy if u can't accept the fact that people talk a lot in the real world then u need to go and talk to more people outside instead of through a mic