Review Detail of Lord_Pedro in Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
Review detail
The story begins with a lot of potential, but as time passes and enemies appear, the protagonist begins to lose himself. He always starts by declaring that he is the best and how he has a lot of knowledge and experience due to his constant reincarnations, but he is constantly nerfed and beaten by mere pathetic enemies. Furthermore, if his enemy is a woman, no matter what she does against him or someone he likes, the author will create some stupid twist to find a way for this woman to enter the MC's harem, the best example of this is when this phoenix woman tries to kill him and Akane, he is defeated and while he is advancing he constantly says that he is going to finish her off. At the time of the fight and with the opportunity to end it once and for all, another character appears out of nowhere who prevents him from ending the phoenix and all the talk of revenge is thrown in the trash. Furthermore, in the future, this phoenix becomes a kind of ally of his even though she tried to kill him. It's stupid and childish, if you like a protagonist who only says he's strong and merciless, but in reality he's pathetic and whenever a pretty enemy appears he forgives her, regardless of what she did, this story is for you.
Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
Master4thWall
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I would disagree with you. There is no middle ground on killing a women's children. Either she hates you forever or she didn't like her kids in the first place. If it's the latter, then he did not make her pay at all. If she isn't pained by the loss, then it's not a loss. And to be blunt, you failed to even remotely make her look like it pained her to lose them. At most, she seemed like her pride was hurt a bit, which isn't remotely enough to make things equal between them. Also, you made her too disgusting personality wise for most people to like the MC even being allied with her, let alone that there are too many vibes of her joining his harem later. Aside from trying to use her descendants in political marriage to end things (something I personally despise) and her trashy personality, you even had her considering whether to kill or have her men r*pe the owner of the place they were trespassing on. They are devils. It fits. That doesn't make them likable, nor does it make readers happy to see the MC on their side. Of course, maybe you fixed things later in the story. I stopped reading for a while after the MC started acting like a scumbag due to the temporary personality shift, as I wanted to wait for when that arc ended.
Master4thWall:You brought up "best example is that" when it is the ONLY example 😂. Anyways, that's how stories work, there is conflict and there is intervention. He killed her children in exchange for hurting him, it wasn't a sparing situation. He's NOT the strongest in the verse from the get to, otherwise the story would have no meaning to continue writing. He wouldn't win against everyone on his own, at least not from the begining stage of the novel. Understandable if that's not that you're looking for, and just want a wishfulfilment mindless slaughter. Thanks for the review.
You brought up "best example is that" when it is the ONLY example 😂. Anyways, that's how stories work, there is conflict and there is intervention. He killed her children in exchange for hurting him, it wasn't a sparing situation. He's NOT the strongest in the verse from the get to, otherwise the story would have no meaning to continue writing. He wouldn't win against everyone on his own, at least not from the begining stage of the novel. Understandable if that's not that you're looking for, and just want a wishfulfilment mindless slaughter. Thanks for the review.
*He clearly mentioned he wasn't going to lose to the Squid, the nearby area would have just been destroyed. Plus, it's not a "A SQUID" it's a other dimensional Kraken. A cousin to Cthulhu's race, the most powerful and fearful alien in history of fiction.*He wouldn't hae died to the attack. He said, "I hadn’t bothered dodging it or blocking the beam. Not because I was suicidal *or didn’t have any way to block it*, but because someone else was there to block it for me."If you're going to complain, complain about things that are true, not false points. Happy reading.
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First, where did he forgive her?? It's been specifically stated many times that he's preparing to revenge. Plus, entirely different situations, since he is the one who did harm to her first (by stealing her Brother's weapon, even if unintentionally). Same point as I mentioned before, he is not the strongest in the verse, he can't be mindless slaughter. Lastly, he isn't 'simping' for her, flirting isn't simping, he has no such feelings for her, he was trying to calm down the situation if anything.
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Bruh, you’re stating internal dialogue and details that were clearly in the chapters to people with 0 hours read time. They're clearly not actually reading the novel.
Master4thWall:*He clearly mentioned he wasn't going to lose to the Squid, the nearby area would have just been destroyed. Plus, it's not a "A SQUID" it's a other dimensional Kraken. A cousin to Cthulhu's race, the most powerful and fearful alien in history of fiction.*He wouldn't hae died to the attack. He said, "I hadn’t bothered dodging it or blocking the beam. Not because I was suicidal *or didn’t have any way to block it*, but because someone else was there to block it for me."If you're going to complain, complain about things that are true, not false points. Happy reading.
CkLance:Bruh, you’re stating internal dialogue and details that were clearly in the chapters to people with 0 hours read time. They're clearly not actually reading the novel.
Master4thWall:In fact, that's the very 1st paragraph in that chapter 😂 yet somehow he failed to read that?
Master4thWall:In fact, that's the very 1st paragraph in that chapter 😂 yet somehow he failed to read that?
I don't have an issue when someone states their opinion. That's honestly the only reason your review is still up. The meme wasn't even directed at you so you don't need to feel hurt over it. I simply pointed out your opinion is formed by ignoring details already addressed in the story.
Lord_Pedro:Funny how you act all loud and proud just to have a moderator by your side.
They just don't read properly and can't appreciate good books. They are too edgy, can't understand there are emotions involved and deep context to characters actions. And enemies turn ally, aly turn to enemies. that's how life goes, that's how good story goes. And he is not a simp which is clearly shown when he punishes Mem Cho. He loves women for sure though but find himself in a situation where he lost too many love and got through too many hearbreaks that new budding feelings are petty to him. But it doetstop him for trying to connect with others though. Aqua is a very complex and real character which is why he is one of my favorite characters in fiction I might even say.
CkLance:I don't have an issue when someone states their opinion. That's honestly the only reason your review is still up. The meme wasn't even directed at you so you don't need to feel hurt over it. I simply pointed out your opinion is formed by ignoring details already addressed in the story.
I don't even take most WN reviews seriously tbh. Its either people who don't read the tags & synopsis complaining about things they were told would be there or people making opinionated reviews ignoring details the author already gave to readers.
Emmanuel_Capricorn:They just don't read properly and can't appreciate good books. They are too edgy, can't understand there are emotions involved and deep context to characters actions. And enemies turn ally, aly turn to enemies. that's how life goes, that's how good story goes. And he is not a simp which is clearly shown when he punishes Mem Cho. He loves women for sure though but find himself in a situation where he lost too many love and got through too many hearbreaks that new budding feelings are petty to him. But it doetstop him for trying to connect with others though. Aqua is a very complex and real character which is why he is one of my favorite characters in fiction I might even say.
Dam- We are just talking about the story and it's points, not about each other, brother. Not being all proud and loud, being comfortable with a friend. No need to get so defensive about it.
Lord_Pedro:Funny how you act all loud and proud just to have a moderator by your side.
Wasn't it deleted because it basically complaints about something that the synopsis mentions? It's like watching a volleyball anime and complaining why it has volleyvball game in it. Pretty dumb reply btw
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Yes. This is complaining about plot points. Hence its still up, but if you're complaining about the tags... well thats a you problem.
JosephJoester:Wasn't it deleted because it basically complaints about something that the synopsis mentions? It's like watching a volleyball anime and complaining why it has volleyvball game in it. Pretty dumb reply btw
nice try buddy, but i never and never will write a review and waste my time when it can easily be deleted
Master4thWall:Wait, buddy was this you? Very... interesting hobby if it is ☠️image
No, read the review that was deleted, as the reviewer is not professional like 99,99% of reviewers are not professionals. He stated his opinion, and what he did DISLIKE. What he did dislike was the way the MC was "crazy", the MC overall was the thing that turned him off. He even said that the novel was good overall minus the MC. And've seen thousands of false synopses, that when I read it was not what the synopsis said. Synopsis can be rewritten at later dates, reviews do not, how? reviews TELL the dates it was written.
JosephJoester:Wasn't it deleted because it basically complaints about something that the synopsis mentions? It's like watching a volleyball anime and complaining why it has volleyvball game in it. Pretty dumb reply btw