Review Detail of AuHNG in System Mania!

Item: System Mania!
Rating: 5

Review detail

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So far, it’s really good, although I do have to say that the chapter starts of a bit grizzly for any of y’all that aren’t super into that. Gonna continue reading this novel and post my final thoughts on this review.

System Mania!

Sinadin_2ndth

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AuHNGLv4AuHNG

Alright so here’s my critique: chapter kind of reads like AI, cause every chapter ends with a: and so the hero’s embark once more tupa stuff. Remove that, and just end the chapter on a cliffhanger.

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Sinadin_2ndthAuthorSinadin_2ndth

Thanks for the review!

8mth

Sinadin_2ndthAuthorSinadin_2ndth

This is an amazing review! Thank you!

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