Review Detail of DabbbleWriter in Obliterator's Dungeon
Review detail
Dungeon crawler with wolf MC. I like it. It's very well written with little to no typos. Right off the bat, you notice the author refrains from using purple prose, which is good because they seem to be aiming for a lot of fast paced action. And boy is there action in the first 6 chapters. The litrpg/system aspect of the story has an element to it (Can't say what it is - spoiler) that will make future progression very interesting based on the choices the MC makes. It's too early to say anything about the characters other than the MC seeming to be competent, which is a big plus. All in all, I've added it to my library.
Obliterator's Dungeon
Hillstrider
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Thank you for noticing the lack of purple prose! I'm going with little to no blue and purple prose, especially purple prose since I'd like to aim for both beginner and experienced readers alike, and as such having an incomprehensible/inpenetrable drawn-out description of something can give readers headaches, especially to beginners. The text will become shorter and shorter over time as the reader can imagine their surroundings without the need of world building in order to focus on action rather than unnecessary visuals!