webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of ExtraordinaryMe in Is It Wrong to Conquer Orario? (Shalltear SI)

Review detail

ExtraordinaryMe
ExtraordinaryMeLv127mthExtraordinaryMe

I have to say I liked the fanfic even though I normally don't like Yuri, the writing is really good giving the fitting vibes.How do you develop her potential romance members along with her being able to give Falna is interesting.But still, I have a few points I would like the Author to take a look at.1. I appreciate you keeping close to the original Shalltear abilities that were written in fandom but sure those abilities aren't all she has so you could add spells or skills that feat vampire or job class,2. She is level 100 as such she and all other guardians have the skill to null all attacks from low-level weapons (not to mention even without it nothing should hurt her).3. I don't get what is her motive to conquer Orario as she doesn't see herself as a superior species to rule over such weak members.In any case, continuing to write you have a good story with good writing,

altalt

Is It Wrong to Conquer Orario? (Shalltear SI)

LittleMarie

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!