Review Detail of Violet_Ivory in Quest Beyond The Shadow

Theres only 1 chapter here at this point so theres not much i can say, although the chapter is pretty long. The grammar is great, good word usage, the sentences flow well, it isnt all that draining when reading world lore. The mc is just really determined, i assume thats going to be a big part of his character but i hope you dont just make him a character that is just constantly trying his best, even if you do, i think it would be nice to have him go through burnouts or reality checks where he realises he cant get through everything with just determination. i assume the story will take an adventure route, sort of like a one piece inspired work where the mc tries to find some sacred treasure. But the author seems to be experienced with writing so i dont think its going to turn out terribly