Review Detail of Violet_Ivory in Heaven Will Not Fall

Ok, so like what on earth is this level of english doing on this site. Like i think I probably got only 90% of the words, 10% required me to use context clues cuz i just didnt get it. this isnt a gripe by any means, but its really funny when theres this level of grammar use, thats also used in the dialogue. Its like some posh neighbourhood where they speak in words that are always 5 letters or more. but i do think thats sort of necessary as switching between that and regular old dialogue would be kind of weird. i think its not bad, but i just personally dont think that a story that requires you to really focus on each word is that great either. it almost made me want to just skip over certain lines. otherwise i think its alright. theres only 2 chapters by this point so theres not much i can say on the story end of things.