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TestaTaichi
TestaTaichiLv149mthTestaTaichi

Please re-edit it.. it was so hard to understand the chapter that I had to read it for 3 times to understand completely.

Naruto:Nara Shadow

Animaniak

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Animaniak
AnimaniakAuthorAnimaniak

what chapter do you mean?

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batuhan
batuhanLv1batuhan

each chapher, in my opinion. Randomly upper and lower cases, nondistinguisable dialogues...

Animaniak:what chapter do you mean?
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Animaniak
AnimaniakAuthorAnimaniak

I think once I've written the story I'll revise all the chapters and add more details and dialog boxes. However, I have real difficulties with grammar, so I probably have to read up on English properly first. I will then also revise the jutsus again and make the fights longer and more extensive. This is all sort of a rough draft.

batuhan:each chapher, in my opinion. Randomly upper and lower cases, nondistinguisable dialogues...
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batuhan
batuhanLv1batuhan

I'll come back after than then. Its great for you to being open about improvement.

Animaniak:I think once I've written the story I'll revise all the chapters and add more details and dialog boxes. However, I have real difficulties with grammar, so I probably have to read up on English properly first. I will then also revise the jutsus again and make the fights longer and more extensive. This is all sort of a rough draft.
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