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batuhan4dReplied to Cesar117%100 agree. Based on the story so far, it doesn't matter which world MC transmigrate. Then why HOTD? Setting is must be one of most important gradients of a story which is not used in this story at all. Author could simply write about kingdom building in no-name apocalypse Earth instead of an anime world.
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It is very stupid thing to whine. The potato person is right. So much virgin energy that they feel themselves NTRed. Then they shouldn't watch the GOT or read ASOIAF. They can find unlimited number of wish fulfilments but still it wont be enough for them for feel secure.
I won't explain myself after this ever again. You either continue reading or you don't. In this world, anything can happen. Your friends can turn into your worst enemies for no good reason. Think like someone who understands the world of ASOIAF. - batuhan7dCommented
whole chapter was about women falling for our perfect MC. Almost each line was a praise for Rob. How come this is giving them a character?
It's not always about sex. These couple of chapters give the Elia Martell and her mother in my story a face and a character. - batuhan20dCommented
scenes changing so suddently. Also it seems like you are dividing one actual chapter into 5-6 chapters which is bad taste in my experience :(
"Where the hell is our sensei!" - batuhan1mthCommented
How does he knew these things? It happened before as if he transmigrated with a database regarding to the others’ status
Snape saw that he had finally defeated the wolf, smiling weakly at his victory. He looked at the system and saw that there were several messages making him level up a few more numbers. He had reached, at least, level 20 after that fight. His stats were far superior to any human of this world, even wizards could not compare to him in physical strength. But in terms of intelligence, there was a group of legendary wizards, who surpassed him. Snape was not discouraged by this, he knew it was only a matter of time before he surpassed everyone - batuhan1mthReplied to Guionista
We need to see a peer from both gender or other but all we see jealous bad guys or Finn-like awed elder brothers. I think it is a reflection of authors’ insecurity but I may overthink it :d
"They need to truly consider me a friend for that to happen." Riezel retorted without hesitation. "After meeting them, you'll also probably understand. Except for Carrera and Sylvanie, the rest have their own agenda." - batuhan1mthReplied to EvoxiusCh 69 Animalistic Drama
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is this fiction one of every male characters are can only be bad or awed by MC and any other female characters are can only be good/friendly or damsell in the stress or very impressed by MC?
"They need to truly consider me a friend for that to happen." Riezel retorted without hesitation. "After meeting them, you'll also probably understand. Except for Carrera and Sylvanie, the rest have their own agenda." - batuhan1mthCommented
I understand you made a "big" plan for that but you could introduce it more mysterious or sinister instead of "muahahah a new pawn for me, i am very baaad and it is hopelesss" kind-of line... you could just describe that there was a observer without giving chinese-like bad-guy vibe. That is the problem you know? Ppl want to introduce a one final nemesis, devil, god but write that entitly like they are cringy teenager...
This paragraph has been deleted. - batuhan1mthCommentedCh 94 An Accidental Information
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It showed 8+5 at first. Then you add 2 point which should make 10+5. Then he just won +2 which should show 12+5=17. Did I misinterpret the previous tables?
Mana -> 10 (+2) ->12 - batuhan1mthCommented
why would they assume that he can drown several Ironborn ship with only his "one" ship? Ironborns' home ground is seas. I dont understand how everyone easly convinced by MC who 14 y/o with only 1 year experience if you could call it... it is absurd to read.
Lord Jason stroked his short beard as he considered Damian's proposal. "Alright, I will give one ship for your help that too without any charge, Damian. I only wish you make good use of it and take down few of those bastards ships," he said finally. - batuhan1mthReplied to DetachedDreamer
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but it activated when he was tired and feeling low. You did not show us how he "excited".
[King Engine: Activates when excited in any kind of conflict. Increase Blood flow and fighting spirit. Low-Level Conquror's Haki effect] - batuhan2mthReplied to RazedF1re
they might be but not in large amounts. Scientist doesnt even legally own their publishings. They mostly win their earnings by projects with grants.
Harry lingered behind, a silent observer, as Vernon approached Petunia. "We're going to the bank to establish a trust," Vernon stated simply, "with Harry as the beneficiary and me acting as the trustee. It's a way for him to invest the earnings from his published papers." - batuhan2mthReplied to
You can do research for private companies for R&D but those wont published. Also you can be commissioned for publish an article or research for a new issue of a journal for pocket money or no money at all. Journals and indexes are monopolizing the money and researchers wont get a penny for even most influential papers of theirs. Moreover, sometimes researchers pays to the journals so their paper could be published… so no, you can’t gain investment money from academic research.
Harry lingered behind, a silent observer, as Vernon approached Petunia. "We're going to the bank to establish a trust," Vernon stated simply, "with Harry as the beneficiary and me acting as the trustee. It's a way for him to invest the earnings from his published papers." - batuhan2mthCommented
since when? He could do introdution here instead of meaningless timeskip..
A month has passed since then.