Good grammar and story, but it's got a lot of subtle and hidden repetition along with just enough unnecessary details that I lost interest. The author is good at disguising it, but it's chapter length padding nonetheless. If you read this, just know that there will probably a good handful of sentences per chapter that are either paraphrased repetitions or completely unnecessary details that add absolutely nothing to the story or mental picture being pained...and it gets worse as the story progresses. ⬆️ See what I did there? Expect that a lot from this book!
Supreme_V
Liked it!
LIKEBro, it was first time I was writing something, so I just unknowingly added too many fillers. Trust me, I had no idea what is a filler. Now that I know, I can't help it. It's not bad if you will read until chapter 50. If you want, just try once. All chapters are free till then. Thanks for your time.
Sevnir:32 chapters. 20% of the current book.
Supreme_V:Bro, it was first time I was writing something, so I just unknowingly added too many fillers. Trust me, I had no idea what is a filler. Now that I know, I can't help it. It's not bad if you will read until chapter 50. If you want, just try once. All chapters are free till then. Thanks for your time.
All_Knowner_8798:Just fine, currently diving in a sea of books preparing for exams. How are you, bro?
Supreme_V:I am just 'not much fine'. I have my exams from 16 Feb, and need to prepare so much.