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"yet" What a horrible word to use! đ±
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I agree. Change Mastery to Advanced
"Upgradation" isn't a word. If you're making this word up to try to make "upgrade" sound cool, stop it. "Upgradation" is cringe and lame. "Evolve" is probably the best word to use.
"How dare you claim that I'm no taller than an ant!!"
Mixed with this!
This!
We're blasting off again!
Morgan rn
Save yourself!
Two words: chapter padding. I read to chapter 20, and it keeps getting worse. Seems like 15% of the chapters are repeating or rephrasing something that was mentioned earlier or drawing out the details of character interactions to annoying lengths...all to increase chapter length. Also, the blind girl who has been blind her whole life feels as helpless as someone who just went blind. Should she be impared? Yes. Should she be utterly helpless? No.
You use "unhurriedly" a lot. Use slowly, leisurely, lazily, and nonchalantly as well to give a better variety of words that basically mean the same thing without sounding repetitive.
Four times now? You use it so often that it loses its meaning.
Saying "This..." is a good way to show shock, but you are using it too much. It becomes less impactful when you use it two to three times per chapter. Save it for really huge situations and mix it up with sayings like "Oh no" or something similar.
The word you are looking for is "hasten." Fasten means to attach things together, like fastening your seatbelt or a rope. Hasten means to make something go faster.