Review Detail of Rizki_Caturianto in A random pokemon journey

It's a great Pokemon fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translate.. The grammar is good too... It have system that show stat, give quest, etc (like most system).. But the reward is so great/generous (his luck is so good) with Larvitar, Caterpie, Charmander (all three with variations), great skill or ability (Aura, X-Ray visions, etc).. I like how he's specialist in variation pokemon, it make me can't wait to see what other pokemon he will get (because his pokemon all is uniques or legendaries).. Hope his Feebas egg will hatch soon and become a variation too, maybe shiny, speed, and element (shiny is a must, although his mother got shiny from Team Aqua).. What I don't like is his Aphaty.. Especially after the drama it cause to Joy and Jenny clan.. Hope his pokemon can cure it or at least decreased it so much.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍👍😍😍😍