Review Detail of IgnotusMartes in Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground

Author has potential. Interesting story, alright world building, intriguing characters. Author is just new to writing so suffers from some major things that made me not want to continue reading. Author's main flaw is DIAOLUGE. Author will have a huge build up to a scenario. Using grandiose words, and verbiage, then when it comes to executing, the words just fall short, or sometimes don't come at all. Almost like the author doesn't know what he wants the characters to say. Second, in an effort to make the antagonists more capable, the author makes the protagonists seem a little incompetent. In an effort to not make the MC naive, he becomes borderline annoying. Last, the chapter lengths are just too short. Feels like so much is skipped over because the author set himself a limit on chapter lengths. Which solidifies my believe that stories with short chapter lengths end up being subpar. All that being said, give this a chance in you're bored though.