Honestly the story is using complicated words and extra description way to much for no reason. It’s like the author is trying to compensate for the lack of a good storyline and the cliches that come with it.
RealmWeaver
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LIKECat_Tip:It okay I gave it a try but for webnovel it’s too tier in terms of writing quality
I wholeheartedly agree with your review. After reading the first twenty chapters, the main character is given a confusing introduction lacking depth of his original life (like his mother, who was his only relative, was not introduced, despite him claiming to be family-first.) He also gets foreshadowed as a transcendent being, leaving the reader lacking in imagination for what’s to come. While this is the authors first series, there are too many errors that make this series uncomfortable to read at times. I would give it an overall rating of 3 stars.
novelmeister:I wholeheartedly agree with your review. After reading the first twenty chapters, the main character is given a confusing introduction lacking depth of his original life (like his mother, who was his only relative, was not introduced, despite him claiming to be family-first.) He also gets foreshadowed as a transcendent being, leaving the reader lacking in imagination for what’s to come. While this is the authors first series, there are too many errors that make this series uncomfortable to read at times. I would give it an overall rating of 3 stars.
I hear what you are saying. I really do and some parts are really confusing. But this story is really really good. The author is not shoving fillers down my throat and the story keeps on progressing. sometimes fast other times slow but a really good read. One of the the best. currently in my top 2. love this novel. I have lost sleep because of this novel.
novelmeister:I wholeheartedly agree with your review. After reading the first twenty chapters, the main character is given a confusing introduction lacking depth of his original life (like his mother, who was his only relative, was not introduced, despite him claiming to be family-first.) He also gets foreshadowed as a transcendent being, leaving the reader lacking in imagination for what’s to come. While this is the authors first series, there are too many errors that make this series uncomfortable to read at times. I would give it an overall rating of 3 stars.