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Review Detail of Daizen_Kuromiya in Anomaly In Highschool DxD

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Daizen_Kuromiya
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I forgot to mention that the story take place in an Alternative Universe of DxD with an Alternative version of Aizen. However, the original world of DxD still exists in this story, and will have its importance later In the story.

Anomaly In Highschool DxD

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Daizen_Kuromiya
Daizen_KuromiyaAuthorDaizen_Kuromiya

Oh man, get ready to waste 2 minutes of your life šŸ˜©: (Btw nothing against those who like them except for the 6th one) 1. Yuri in harem šŸ¤® (c*ckold by a girl) 2. Netorare 3. Clones s*x (c*ckold by themselves) 4. 300 years old vampire that looks like a 6 years old girl. (Lolis) 5. Mind control on women 6. R*pe 7. S&M 8. Authors using Japanese words out of nowhere in a English story, I donā€™t mind the (San,sama,kun, chan, sensei) but words like (Arigato, gomenasai, Kawai, etcā€¦) are justā€¦ šŸ˜” 9. Joining a peerage for litteraly no reason 10. Giving evil girls sad and difficult backstory for you know whatā€¦ 11. Godesses who wants to f*ck a nobody, give him wishes and then send him to other worlds for him to f*ck other women 12. Sentient systems, I donā€™t like systems In general but a system that can talk is a big no for me 13. Giving said system a name, a body and a place In the harem 14. Acting overprotective of someone you only met minutes ago (*cough!* Konelo and Asiaā€¦ šŸ‘ļø) 15. Nerfing a character to fit the world (I swear I read a story where ssj2 goku wasnā€™t able to beat Raynare and her two friends bruh šŸ’€) 16. Tsundere and very shy girls

DeusxXxMachina:Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canā€™t stand.
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Mr_Cuak
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Love the story so far , bro 2 questions 1- Why did you put 1 star in your review? 2 - Why is it a must a Harem in DxD? Brimstone for example is not harem or romance idk why didnĀ“t arrive to that part yet

Yuki_55
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who is the FL?

Daizen_Kuromiya
Daizen_KuromiyaAuthorDaizen_Kuromiya

I put 1 star because I didnā€™t want to affect the reviews, putting 5 star will just mislead those new on Webnovel. I think Harem is a must, not because I like Harem but because most of the readers will read a DxD fic expecting it to be an Harem, well canā€™t really blame them since itā€™s was a harem novel originally. But the thing is that there is also a minority of readers like me who donā€™t like DxD stories with Harem because we donā€™t need even need the Almighty to know that most of them are going to be a ā€˜catch them allā€™ with most of the girls only being seen once. Harem is only good when each girl have personality and not just be like Ā«Oh, you beat me in a chess match so letā€™s get married.Ā» Ā«Oh, you saved me from my forced engagement letā€™s go to bed.Ā» Ā«What? You donā€™t hate me because of my fallen angel side, I-I love you.Ā»

Mr_Cuak:Love the story so far , bro 2 questions 1- Why did you put 1 star in your review? 2 - Why is it a must a Harem in DxD? Brimstone for example is not harem or romance idk why didnĀ“t arrive to that part yet
Daizen_Kuromiya
Daizen_KuromiyaAuthorDaizen_Kuromiya

Iā€™am hesitating between Seekvaira, Roygun, Rossweisse and Lavinia Reni.

Yuki_55:who is the FL?
DeusxXxMachina
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Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canā€™t stand.

Mr_Cuak
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I am one of those that prefer monogamy , plus is easy to write , one woman is already enough .

Daizen_Kuromiya:I put 1 star because I didnā€™t want to affect the reviews, putting 5 star will just mislead those new on Webnovel. I think Harem is a must, not because I like Harem but because most of the readers will read a DxD fic expecting it to be an Harem, well canā€™t really blame them since itā€™s was a harem novel originally. But the thing is that there is also a minority of readers like me who donā€™t like DxD stories with Harem because we donā€™t need even need the Almighty to know that most of them are going to be a ā€˜catch them allā€™ with most of the girls only being seen once. Harem is only good when each girl have personality and not just be like Ā«Oh, you beat me in a chess match so letā€™s get married.Ā» Ā«Oh, you saved me from my forced engagement letā€™s go to bed.Ā» Ā«What? You donā€™t hate me because of my fallen angel side, I-I love you.Ā»
Daizen_Kuromiya
Daizen_KuromiyaAuthorDaizen_Kuromiya

Mr_Cuak:I am one of those that prefer monogamy , plus is easy to write , one woman is already enough .
Daizen_Kuromiya
Daizen_KuromiyaAuthorDaizen_Kuromiya

Got deleted so hereā€™s the screenshot (too much of a pain to rewrite it)

DeusxXxMachina:Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canā€™t stand.
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Daizen_Kuromiya
Daizen_KuromiyaAuthorDaizen_Kuromiya

DeusxXxMachina:Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canā€™t stand.
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DeusxXxMachina
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My guy, you my lost brother or something? šŸ˜­ I agree with everything but I like systems lol

Daizen_Kuromiya:Got deleted so hereā€™s the screenshot (too much of a pain to rewrite it)
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DeusxXxMachina
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Oh and, why are you on light mode?!!

Daizen_Kuromiya:
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Daizen_Kuromiya
Daizen_KuromiyaAuthorDaizen_Kuromiya

New account, so I forgot to change. Thanks for reminding me!

DeusxXxMachina:Oh and, why are you on light mode?!!
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Azathoth2
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harem!

DeusxXxMachina:Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canā€™t stand.
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DeusxXxMachina
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Azathoth2:harem!
PrimordialDemiurge
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Daizen_Kuromiya:Iā€™am hesitating between Seekvaira, Roygun, Rossweisse and Lavinia Reni.
PrimordialDemiurge
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Nice Cover Edit!

Daizen_Kuromiya
Daizen_KuromiyaAuthorDaizen_Kuromiya

Thanks šŸ˜Š

PrimordialDemiurge:Nice Cover Edit!
FinnsRevenge
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No sera?

Daizen_Kuromiya:Iā€™am hesitating between Seekvaira, Roygun, Rossweisse and Lavinia Reni.
whyudothat_
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Oh god.. šŸ˜­šŸ˜­ I'm hesitating to read this one but I like the way you point that out. I remember reading stories with the number 11 as the introduction.

Daizen_Kuromiya:Got deleted so hereā€™s the screenshot (too much of a pain to rewrite it)
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whyudothat_
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This set of girls (except for Rossweisse) reminds me of that fic from ffn, Anomaly by Rosenkreutz, probably the last time I've read a great dxd fic. It's more focus on action and building of his peerage. If it's still not too late, I vote for Rossweisse and Roygun.

Daizen_Kuromiya:Iā€™am hesitating between Seekvaira, Roygun, Rossweisse and Lavinia Reni.