I forgot to mention that the story take place in an Alternative Universe of DxD with an Alternative version of Aizen. However, the original world of DxD still exists in this story, and will have its importance later In the story.
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LIKEOh man, get ready to waste 2 minutes of your life š©: (Btw nothing against those who like them except for the 6th one) 1. Yuri in harem š¤® (c*ckold by a girl) 2. Netorare 3. Clones s*x (c*ckold by themselves) 4. 300 years old vampire that looks like a 6 years old girl. (Lolis) 5. Mind control on women 6. R*pe 7. S&M 8. Authors using Japanese words out of nowhere in a English story, I donāt mind the (San,sama,kun, chan, sensei) but words like (Arigato, gomenasai, Kawai, etcā¦) are justā¦ š 9. Joining a peerage for litteraly no reason 10. Giving evil girls sad and difficult backstory for you know whatā¦ 11. Godesses who wants to f*ck a nobody, give him wishes and then send him to other worlds for him to f*ck other women 12. Sentient systems, I donāt like systems In general but a system that can talk is a big no for me 13. Giving said system a name, a body and a place In the harem 14. Acting overprotective of someone you only met minutes ago (*cough!* Konelo and Asiaā¦ šļø) 15. Nerfing a character to fit the world (I swear I read a story where ssj2 goku wasnāt able to beat Raynare and her two friends bruh š) 16. Tsundere and very shy girls
DeusxXxMachina:Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canāt stand.image
I put 1 star because I didnāt want to affect the reviews, putting 5 star will just mislead those new on Webnovel. I think Harem is a must, not because I like Harem but because most of the readers will read a DxD fic expecting it to be an Harem, well canāt really blame them since itās was a harem novel originally. But the thing is that there is also a minority of readers like me who donāt like DxD stories with Harem because we donāt need even need the Almighty to know that most of them are going to be a ācatch them allā with most of the girls only being seen once. Harem is only good when each girl have personality and not just be like Ā«Oh, you beat me in a chess match so letās get married.Ā» Ā«Oh, you saved me from my forced engagement letās go to bed.Ā» Ā«What? You donāt hate me because of my fallen angel side, I-I love you.Ā»
Mr_Cuak:Love the story so far , bro 2 questions 1- Why did you put 1 star in your review? 2 - Why is it a must a Harem in DxD? Brimstone for example is not harem or romance idk why didnĀ“t arrive to that part yet
Daizen_Kuromiya:I put 1 star because I didnāt want to affect the reviews, putting 5 star will just mislead those new on Webnovel. I think Harem is a must, not because I like Harem but because most of the readers will read a DxD fic expecting it to be an Harem, well canāt really blame them since itās was a harem novel originally. But the thing is that there is also a minority of readers like me who donāt like DxD stories with Harem because we donāt need even need the Almighty to know that most of them are going to be a ācatch them allā with most of the girls only being seen once. Harem is only good when each girl have personality and not just be like Ā«Oh, you beat me in a chess match so letās get married.Ā» Ā«Oh, you saved me from my forced engagement letās go to bed.Ā» Ā«What? You donāt hate me because of my fallen angel side, I-I love you.Ā»
Mr_Cuak:I am one of those that prefer monogamy , plus is easy to write , one woman is already enough .
DeusxXxMachina:Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canāt stand.image
DeusxXxMachina:Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canāt stand.image
Daizen_Kuromiya:Got deleted so hereās the screenshot (too much of a pain to rewrite it)image
DeusxXxMachina:Just a small question but what kind of thing do you guys all hate to see in a story? Something that you canāt stand.image
Daizen_Kuromiya:Iāam hesitating between Seekvaira, Roygun, Rossweisse and Lavinia Reni.
Daizen_Kuromiya:Iāam hesitating between Seekvaira, Roygun, Rossweisse and Lavinia Reni.
Oh god.. šš I'm hesitating to read this one but I like the way you point that out. I remember reading stories with the number 11 as the introduction.
Daizen_Kuromiya:Got deleted so hereās the screenshot (too much of a pain to rewrite it)image
This set of girls (except for Rossweisse) reminds me of that fic from ffn, Anomaly by Rosenkreutz, probably the last time I've read a great dxd fic. It's more focus on action and building of his peerage. If it's still not too late, I vote for Rossweisse and Roygun.
Daizen_Kuromiya:Iāam hesitating between Seekvaira, Roygun, Rossweisse and Lavinia Reni.