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I am surprised by how genuinely good this is I for one have never seen a beast boy fanfic before. I look forward to the process you will make
Amalgam Universe Beast Boy
Malamber
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I believe you can, just stay patient in the early chapters. My first book and all. But on that point you will see a good amount of evolution.
Yuri_in_HAREM_is_X:Can `I’ read this without taking a critical hit???
Malamber:Thanks for giving me my first review. I hope this is a pleasant journey for us both. Enjoy
Yes, there will be. though I'm planning for the long hall with this book. Plan to have a few flings, and if one of those hits me good ill circle back but I'm trying to stay away from massive harem where he bangs every girl that's in the story. I'm also trying to stay away from the normal relationships in all the fic's.
gamabunda4873:thank u for titling the chapters will there be romance of any kind in relation to the mc/gar
mini harem?!?!?!?! (like 2 or 3vote d/dc m/marvel ( first pick )raven (d Rouge (mharley quinn (dsupergirl (dm.j. (m(only the newest film series or some badazz comic versions)gwen (mBarbara Gordon (d (..... most dont get her right as a character. There are some good portrayals sometimes, tho think down to earth with sass and a student complex)pepper potts (m(only the Ironman Adventures version)( second )black cat (m(depends on the personality)poison ivy (dmiss Martian (d shuri (m (treat her like the princess she is)( badazz and a cutiepie hard combo to find)black widow (m (best mommy)catwoman kyle (d (not caged/de-clawed free-spirited and loyal onlykitty (mmagik (m jean (m (over used and bad portrayals could be done better)....i got problems.....
Malamber:Yes, there will be. though I'm planning for the long hall with this book. Plan to have a few flings, and if one of those hits me good ill circle back but I'm trying to stay away from massive harem where he bangs every girl that's in the story. I'm also trying to stay away from the normal relationships in all the fic's.
Several of those I will have to decline, mostly because they are way overdone but some Like Black Cat and Catwoman will be combined with a little Electra thrown in as a love interest for Devilbat, Not going to steal My boy Graysons girl so no Barbra Gordon and I find the new Batgirl a little 1 dimensional. Shuri would be interesting but she is a very intelligent character and I am not sure I can do her justice. Harley Quinn wont be possible for reasons. Pepper has a thing for smart guys and I dont plan to go that route. The rest well, we will see. Dont forget with the ability to merge characters I can have lots of fun, and I have no issue gender bending a few to make my story stand out. Mary Shazam has a bit of my attention and a thought about combining Jean and Rogue.
gamabunda4873:mini harem?!?!?!?! (like 2 or 3vote d/dc m/marvel ( first pick )raven (d Rouge (mharley quinn (dsupergirl (dm.j. (m(only the newest film series or some badazz comic versions)gwen (mBarbara Gordon (d (..... most dont get her right as a character. There are some good portrayals sometimes, tho think down to earth with sass and a student complex)pepper potts (m(only the Ironman Adventures version)( second )black cat (m(depends on the personality)poison ivy (dmiss Martian (d shuri (m (treat her like the princess she is)( badazz and a cutiepie hard combo to find)black widow (m (best mommy)catwoman kyle (d (not caged/de-clawed free-spirited and loyal onlykitty (mmagik (m jean (m (over used and bad portrayals could be done better)....i got problems.....image
i love you.... bad.....well, i am not a big Grayson fan because most writers want to explain the dynamics between him and Batman in every single movie that they're in. Because we might not understand how they interact even though they don't have to do that and their best way to do that Is to make them a whining little b****** cry about how unfair life is to them but i do try to like him because i know it's the writers fault, not the characters, but as u can tell... not exactly working however, i want to argue the shuri point you dont have to tell the intelligence but show it. (which is admittedly harder to write but...u can do it)dont explain the details. If the mc doesn't get it, have her explain like she's lovingly talking to a stupid cave man boy-toy, at least if she has to explain
Malamber:Several of those I will have to decline, mostly because they are way overdone but some Like Black Cat and Catwoman will be combined with a little Electra thrown in as a love interest for Devilbat, Not going to steal My boy Graysons girl so no Barbra Gordon and I find the new Batgirl a little 1 dimensional. Shuri would be interesting but she is a very intelligent character and I am not sure I can do her justice. Harley Quinn wont be possible for reasons. Pepper has a thing for smart guys and I dont plan to go that route. The rest well, we will see. Dont forget with the ability to merge characters I can have lots of fun, and I have no issue gender bending a few to make my story stand out. Mary Shazam has a bit of my attention and a thought about combining Jean and Rogue.
Just keep reading and don't hesitate to give me your thoughts. Just accept that at the core this will be my story.
gamabunda4873:i love you.... bad.....well, i am not a big Grayson fan because most writers want to explain the dynamics between him and Batman in every single movie that they're in. Because we might not understand how they interact even though they don't have to do that and their best way to do that Is to make them a whining little b****** cry about how unfair life is to them but i do try to like him because i know it's the writers fault, not the characters, but as u can tell... not exactly working however, i want to argue the shuri point you dont have to tell the intelligence but show it. (which is admittedly harder to write but...u can do it)dont explain the details. If the mc doesn't get it, have her explain like she's lovingly talking to a stupid cave man boy-toy, at least if she has to explainimage
Raven isn't done as much as you think and the reason why is the very thing you just said people thinking she has been overused and now she is barely used for the love interest
Malamber:Several of those I will have to decline, mostly because they are way overdone but some Like Black Cat and Catwoman will be combined with a little Electra thrown in as a love interest for Devilbat, Not going to steal My boy Graysons girl so no Barbra Gordon and I find the new Batgirl a little 1 dimensional. Shuri would be interesting but she is a very intelligent character and I am not sure I can do her justice. Harley Quinn wont be possible for reasons. Pepper has a thing for smart guys and I dont plan to go that route. The rest well, we will see. Dont forget with the ability to merge characters I can have lots of fun, and I have no issue gender bending a few to make my story stand out. Mary Shazam has a bit of my attention and a thought about combining Jean and Rogue.
Malamber:Several of those I will have to decline, mostly because they are way overdone but some Like Black Cat and Catwoman will be combined with a little Electra thrown in as a love interest for Devilbat, Not going to steal My boy Graysons girl so no Barbra Gordon and I find the new Batgirl a little 1 dimensional. Shuri would be interesting but she is a very intelligent character and I am not sure I can do her justice. Harley Quinn wont be possible for reasons. Pepper has a thing for smart guys and I dont plan to go that route. The rest well, we will see. Dont forget with the ability to merge characters I can have lots of fun, and I have no issue gender bending a few to make my story stand out. Mary Shazam has a bit of my attention and a thought about combining Jean and Rogue.
Malamber:Just keep reading and don't hesitate to give me your thoughts. Just accept that at the core this will be my story.
Malamber:Thanks for giving me my first review. I hope this is a pleasant journey for us both. Enjoy
Why cant harley be his girl she's perfectly crazy/Hot and definitely open to other girls being added to the bed😏
Malamber:Several of those I will have to decline, mostly because they are way overdone but some Like Black Cat and Catwoman will be combined with a little Electra thrown in as a love interest for Devilbat, Not going to steal My boy Graysons girl so no Barbra Gordon and I find the new Batgirl a little 1 dimensional. Shuri would be interesting but she is a very intelligent character and I am not sure I can do her justice. Harley Quinn wont be possible for reasons. Pepper has a thing for smart guys and I dont plan to go that route. The rest well, we will see. Dont forget with the ability to merge characters I can have lots of fun, and I have no issue gender bending a few to make my story stand out. Mary Shazam has a bit of my attention and a thought about combining Jean and Rogue.
Even if it wasn't harem, if Jean was the love interest I would read it, I just want to know before I start, is Jean part of the harem? I haven't started reading yet.
Malamber:Several of those I will have to decline, mostly because they are way overdone but some Like Black Cat and Catwoman will be combined with a little Electra thrown in as a love interest for Devilbat, Not going to steal My boy Graysons girl so no Barbra Gordon and I find the new Batgirl a little 1 dimensional. Shuri would be interesting but she is a very intelligent character and I am not sure I can do her justice. Harley Quinn wont be possible for reasons. Pepper has a thing for smart guys and I dont plan to go that route. The rest well, we will see. Dont forget with the ability to merge characters I can have lots of fun, and I have no issue gender bending a few to make my story stand out. Mary Shazam has a bit of my attention and a thought about combining Jean and Rogue.
Klyscha:Even if it wasn't harem, if Jean was the love interest I would read it, I just want to know before I start, is Jean part of the harem? I haven't started reading yet.
Malamber:Thanks for giving me my first review. I hope this is a pleasant journey for us both. Enjoy
Malamber:It's a single FL, but she may want to change that. Haven't decided yet.
Malamber:Yes, there will be. though I'm planning for the long hall with this book. Plan to have a few flings, and if one of those hits me good ill circle back but I'm trying to stay away from massive harem where he bangs every girl that's in the story. I'm also trying to stay away from the normal relationships in all the fic's.
Malamber:It's a single FL, but she may want to change that. Haven't decided yet.