Review Detail of HaremForLife in Depravity to it's finest
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I got scammed and its still a cuck book, nothing changed really. Heavy yuri and mc having fun looking at it..................................................................
Depravity to it's finest
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My friend, thanks for your review even if it's negative, I appreciate your thoughts. From tags you can see there is still yuri there, I just removed heavy yuri. In the story I am writing removing yuri completely is too hard, so I am sorry about that and if you don't like story or its parts you can tell me mildly, for the suggestions that are helpful, I am always grateful and welcome.
So whats with [ This chapter will not have yuri] at the start of chapter 10. you wanted to change it, so what happened? Its really so hard to not make his girls have s/ ex with each other? Its this really soo important in your book? I told you that your ither tags have dark stuff, but only one have sharing. So whats the point of going with disgusting yuri? I have no idea what kind of importance to the plot yuri has, other than cuck feelings.
FateScore:My friend, thanks for your review even if it's negative, I appreciate your thoughts. From tags you can see there is still yuri there, I just removed heavy yuri. In the story I am writing removing yuri completely is too hard, so I am sorry about that and if you don't like story or its parts you can tell me mildly, for the suggestions that are helpful, I am always grateful and welcome.
Sigh... I feel really sorry to have downed your mood when you liked the start, but I do not have enough time to go through all of posted chapters and the one I have already written, and as I try to change some parts, I feel like forcing myself and that wasn't my goal, further I will write as per my time and mood, taking care that grammar mistakes will be as low as is possible for me, once again I apologize, as a author it makes me really sad, that my story couldn't live upto your expectations.
HaremForLife:So whats with [ This chapter will not have yuri] at the start of chapter 10. you wanted to change it, so what happened? Its really so hard to not make his girls have s/ ex with each other? Its this really soo important in your book? I told you that your ither tags have dark stuff, but only one have sharing. So whats the point of going with disgusting yuri? I have no idea what kind of importance to the plot yuri has, other than cuck feelings.
Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.
FateScore:Sigh... I feel really sorry to have downed your mood when you liked the start, but I do not have enough time to go through all of posted chapters and the one I have already written, and as I try to change some parts, I feel like forcing myself and that wasn't my goal, further I will write as per my time and mood, taking care that grammar mistakes will be as low as is possible for me, once again I apologize, as a author it makes me really sad, that my story couldn't live upto your expectations.
Bruh that's because....There was only one women in mc's harem in first 9 chaps.... but anyway bye. Hope ya catch better reads.
HaremForLife:Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.
FateScore:My friend, thanks for your review even if it's negative, I appreciate your thoughts. From tags you can see there is still yuri there, I just removed heavy yuri. In the story I am writing removing yuri completely is too hard, so I am sorry about that and if you don't like story or its parts you can tell me mildly, for the suggestions that are helpful, I am always grateful and welcome.
HaremForLife:Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.
HaremForLife:Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.
