Like the grammar is the point here. I dont belive you dont know where yuri is in your own book though and simple fix would work fine. Whatever, have fun writing about mc who likes to share. Funny think is, he was such an alpha dude in first 9 chapters, and you turned him into a cuck who pushes his own woman (his cute mom...) into the embrace of others. Just Wow...Yeah you are right, im dissapointed. Bye.

So whats with [ This chapter will not have yuri] at the start of chapter 10. you wanted to change it, so what happened? Its really so hard to not make his girls have s/ ex with each other? Its this really soo important in your book? I told you that your ither tags have dark stuff, but only one have sharing. So whats the point of going with disgusting yuri? I have no idea what kind of importance to the plot yuri has, other than cuck feelings.

Hahaha ofc

Now I see who gave you that idea, looks like its better to write for readers who enjoy cuck novels. Just sad man.

I got scammed and its still a cuck book, nothing changed really. Heavy yuri and mc having fun looking at it..................................................................

Looks like I got scammed, nothing changed really. Did you lie to that guy or its him? There is still lots of yuri and cuck stuff.

Culture guy told me that you want to make some changes. I deleted my review. Please let me know when finał version will be finished. Like I said man, start was perfect.

True, all other tags are fine. Take out yuri and the novel is really good. The start was fun, till chapter 10.

After reading chap 10 i saw all your tags in the synopsis, i dont care about all of them. But you had to write yuri/ntr. The rest of the tags dont have anything that makes his woman have s/ ex with other people. From all of those tags you choose disgusting yuri. Good luck with it. Your partner have s/ ex with others and you dont see it as ntr haha. Good one.

MC likes to watch = cuck. You should give him a corner chair to enjoy more. Pathetic. Have fun with your yuri book.

Mc's first partner is his hot and cute mother...5 min after they had fun she is having heavy s/ ex with another woman on his eyes. She call herself her miss tress so thats not the first time they are doing it. Thats ntr and its disgusting.

and the trash starts...

tftc

this looks like some dom kind of kins...i hope im right, no yuri please

plesase please

yeah

thanks for the chapter

Mom is cute

thanks for the chapter