Review Detail of DaoistCGid7j in Fist Of Haki

Damn, now I know that you are the one who wrote the amazing novel in which no one can see a flaw (The Lion King). Oh man, you are amazing, and I am sure that this novel of yours will not disappoint us. Keep going...but maybe if you try to improve your way of writing, I don't mean the quality of the words, I mean the space between the sentences. I wish it would improve, because it annoys me sometimes and reduces the enjoyment a little.