Thanks for the chapter ،But why did I drop the novel? It started out very well although I hated that you didn't change all of Luffy or make him more muscular like young Roger, but I liked the story, author please come back

Didn't you notice what I wrote? I wrote that the reason for his development so quickly was because he was an MC and plot armor because all the characters in One Piece, Roger, Whitebeard, Garp, and the other strong characters needed many years to become stronger even though they had no shortage of talent, so Why did Luffy develop so quickly? This is because he is the MC in the story, and the stupid Ace did not train in Haki like Luffy, but rather focused on his fruit, and this is something we can see from his skills in the fruit, which limited his many talents. The question is, why is Yamato stronger than Ace, even though Ace is the son of the Pirate King? This is because Yamato focuses on Haki, because she and Kaido always fight with Haki, and I'm sure this is what Kaido wants, for her to focus on Haki instead of fruit.

Thanks for the chapter, you have a rare sense of humor, hahahahahahaha, paw stone paw paw paw stone it's like rap

Thanks for thr chapter

Thank you for the chapter, but I think that Ace and Luffy have almost the same talent. The reason for the strength of Luffy's talent in the anime is because he is the MC himself and because of the plot armor. Do not forget that Ace is Roger's son and we can say that Roger has the strongest talent in the entire world of One Piece, whether it is a physical talent. Or Haki, and with the enhancement and that gift that enhances intelligence a little, I can say with confidence that Ace now has a talent much stronger than Luffy's. Is what I'm saying is wrong?

So far I have seen a lot of illogical things, the actions of the characters, the conversations, the growth in power, you should know that if you want to grow in power quickly in one day, one week, or one month, This would be because of the capabilities. This means that if I want to explain the talent difference between Luffy and Makino, it is like that Makino's talent level is level-1 and Luffy's talent level is level-1000. You should know that Luffy's talent is at the top of the world because of his lineage that came from his grandfather, Garp, and his father, Dragon. Makino is just an ordinary person who has no blood relation to Garp, but rather just a girl who Garp sees as his daughter. I'll give you a better idea for a novel, How about writing a novel where someone incarnates into Luffy's body in the time period after Ace's death while he was sleeping on Law's boat?

Thanks for the 2 chapters

Thanks for the chpter, but can you stop dragging out the chapters, as talking to these mobs and not defeating them quickly reminded me of Chinese novels, it is annoying as three or more chapters were spent on these mob characters, it was possible for the MC to just destroy them in a second but he went and talked to them a lot, Just kill the hell out of them

Thanks for the chapter,bro This was very funny, but will there be two chapters today?

Is this the end of Asafa's story? I feel like I was with him the whole time

I will ask you some questions, brother: What is the strength level of Luffy, Admiral or Yonko? Do you remember that Kaido did not only face Luffy, but also faced Law, Kid, Zoro, and perhaps other characters? He fought them for a long time. Another question: Who is stronger, the Admiral or the Yonko? How much is the difference in strength between them and what is the reason? Did Luffy's three Haki reach Kaido's level? Did he reach his normal physical fitness without turning to the admiral level? To answer my previous question, why did they allied with CP0, even though Luffy and Zoro could have easily eliminated the Seraphim if we said that their level had reached the admiral level? The stupid thing is that Luffy turned into the gear 5 against Lucci (even though he didn't need that) and he switched to gear 4 against the seraphim and he and Lucci hit the seraphim but nothing happened to the seraphim (I mean he came back)? I mean, could Luffy and Zoro easily destroy the Seraphim? Some of you may think that I love Kaido very much, so I say this, but no, I started following One Piece when I was 8 years old, and I am also a realistic person who can accept these (irrational) things.

Important advice: Try to make the balance of power stable and logical. I mean, watch the new episode of the anime, as logically it was possible for Zoro and Luffy alone to deal with the Seraphim easily, but what did they do??? He allied himself with CP0???and he switched to Gear 4 and attacked with Conqueror Haki and Armament Haki, and not only that, but he also attacked with Lucci in one attack??? and what happened???? Nothing happened to the Seraphim. He returned in the next chapter in the manga. Do you think this is logical?? Even Kaido is afraid of Zoro's attack, not to mention Seraphim. Zoro and Luffy attacked Kaido, and Luffy won in the end, even though it was not logical that he won. Do you want to know why? Because Luffy's strength may not have even reached the level of an admiral. Do you want proof?? You should know that Luffy and Zoro are close in terms of strength. Zoro faced Kizaru and perhaps they tied. I don't know why it appears in the manga. Summary: Oda ruined the balance of power in One Piece, where he raises the strength of the characters and suddenly lowers their level of strength for the sake of the story and to extend the story. It is illogical for Luffy to win over Kaido, why?? See, these are Kaido's features: 1. Very advanced weapon Haki 2-Advanced Observation Haki that sees the future 3- Conqueror’s Haki is a better level than Luffy, at least (logically) 3 Unparalleled defense as Luffy's attacks are like roaches to him, top of the world physical strength, super stamina, and powerful regeneration (due to his bloodline and his special fruit) 5-Awakened Dragon Fruit (Luffy was destroyed without just waking up) -For your information, Kaido could have avoided most of Luffy and the others' attacks, but he did not. It doesn't make sense to make Kaido tired because Akainu and Aokihi fought for 8 days, but Kaido fought for 3 days, even though his strongest advantage is physical strength???

Welcome back again, congratulations on your recovery, and if you are still in pain, take your time to heal, the novel will not escape.

Thanks for the chapter,you are still amazing

Author Do you think we are fools?? This idiot's mental age is more than 18 years old. If you want to build drama in the story, make it more logical. Don't force the story. In the beginning you gave us details without explaining them. The mc seems to be logical and can become cool and has a chiseled body. This means there is a possibility. The MC may have practiced martial arts, and why is he so emotional?? Why doesn't he defend himself??

No, it's really funny and realistic, that's really what the idiot Ace would do, everyone with the letter D in their name would cause trouble. Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

I have a problem understanding the power of mc, if we say that Ace has both Roger's physical talent and Haki, then we add to him the gift of physical strength, this will make him have a physical talent even better than Garp, then we add to him Whitebeard's Haki talent with Roger's Haki talent and capabilities. What will this make him? And then we added the enhanced Flame Fruit with no weak points? If we think about it logically, his strength should at least reach the level of Vice Emperor, remember...at least, and all the characters we found in the chapter he should defeat with one punch, remember that Luffy, by two years, reached the level of Vice Admiral, mid-level to High....., even if we say that it is due to a growth spurt because he is a teenager, we can say the same thing. Ace....... I hope you respond to my comment and at least clarify some things... because I am confused and I do not like to The story is illogical Note: From your loyal fan of the novel (The Lion King)

Damn, now I know that you are the one who wrote the amazing novel in which no one can see a flaw (The Lion King). Oh man, you are amazing, and I am sure that this novel of yours will not disappoint us. Keep going...but maybe if you try to improve your way of writing, I don't mean the quality of the words, I mean the space between the sentences. I wish it would improve, because it annoys me sometimes and reduces the enjoyment a little.

Thanks for the chapter,brother, When his observation skill develops to a high level, will he have a very strong analytical ability like Ayanokouji Kiyotaka? Or at least half of what he has? Because it makes sense