Review Detail of john_timothy in Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.
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Bad title it should be “in marvel with Shazam system” your story isn’t just “slow” it’s boring af man. We are trying to read something exciting not fall asleep. Just should have given him normal Shazam powers but I feel like you don’t know how to write that and make it fun so you made…this…
Champion: Shazam in the M.C.U.
Saintbarbido
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As strange as it may sound I do believe that your story has actual potential. Don’t let this discourage you. Keep improving and don’t give up! I believe in you!
Saintbarbido:harsh. but I understand
Every single fic this guy has made only has 3 stars, with only one exception, and that is only because a few children spammed 5 stars. And even with that, it barely got over 4 stars. This author has no talent for writing and is just making fics with the most popular fanbase, and is somehow getting more views than what the quality shows.
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"that is why he us" I can tell you know a lot about high-quality books. And know what is good quality and what is not.
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