Review Detail of Tifala in The darkness inside.

What can highlight a good transfer of thoughts. But the problem is that the chapters are as short as possible (I see this for the first time). Even if it's a story. What was written below about 3k and 4k words in a chapter so few write. Basically, write 2k and 1.5k per chapter. You need at least 1k in each chapter and add plot directly to that story.