Review Detail of Chaddts in Naruto : Raijin

The author is using some kind of a.i to correct his writing. I'm not sure to what extent this is a.i written, but most of the descriptive paragraphs are entirely a.i., i.m.o Also, everything is very vague when it's described. And much of the story is told and not shown. There are other issues as well, pertaining to continuity. For instance he gets a job, and then he gets some tools, and training, from the boss, and then nothing about it is ever mentioned again. The story is also rushed. There is no real character building for his teammates or anyone else. Too much is glossed over as well, and simply not explained. It's very jarring. This needs a lot of work and for the author to reword everything is his own words instead of using the a.i to write.