Review Detail of Woshi in MARVEL: Scientific Path

Overall great writing quality. There's a solid pace in relation to the main characters abilities and their influence in the world. The world building itself is nice, branching out to different areas of the marvel universe rather than staying solely confined to the United States. The biggest link I would say is the "romance". It was abrupt and honestly nonsensical. You took the time to build up other aspects of your story but decide to rush this part. Either dedicate more chapters next time and get better with experience or don't include it at all. Though, most will probably just hate the selection you made, which while unique, seems to be chosen solely for that reason and nothing else considering the plethora of candidates you can choose from which can contribute more in power and influence, but I guess that's not what love is huh? Who knows, still the weakest link. Fun story, will watch out for future updates.