From what I can tell, this story is spot on. Good updates, writing quality is phenomenal, description is outstanding, and the characters are richly made. With that being said, the only thing I think would be nice to add is a bit more visual description in terms of colors which can help flesh out how people look. Perhaps thought description of different people to show a number of perspectives. With that being said, I've debated if I should give this story 4.8 stars or 5. With the 5 stars, it can be misleading because no story is truly perfect. Since your story still seems to be in the early stages (as it hasn't been around all that long from what I can tell), I'll give 5.
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