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This is the first novel where I’ve seen a character pick up a swarm ability but doesn’t use it to its purpose. It’s like the Mc is a ant queen But instead of using her ants for combat and expansion. Just uses the ants for recon while the ant queen does the fighting. The ant queen doesn’t even try increasing population actively which ruins the ability absorbed. This is very dull and boring. And this continues beyond 200 chapters. He picked such a crap choice for a beast to merge with. And I believe it’s going to increment little by little, authors going to say stuff like…. and this is why picking this egg was wise etc when it’s actually the weakest of the lot, one such statement is survival of the fittest not strongest. But the mc is trash compared to his counterparts even then. He fights hard whereas his counterparts would stomp his current enemys. But like I said. Author will go survival of the fittest not the strongest. This is not a diss to the author but what’s the point of having an ant queen that doesn’t try gaining more ants and expanding through that path. I’ve already overlooked the mc being raped and forced to have a child, raise the child due to plot which ruined any proper future he could have had. Even then I hate how everyone is acting like they are the good guys when the boar king was the biggest victim, truthfully to me I think this story is actually from a villains point of view whereas the whole mammoth clan is a abomination and the boar king is the mc trying to get his revenge. That’s why I hope my previous comment comes true. It’s good to get your readers frustrated like this but I’m frustrated not for good reasons after reading 200 chapters, like I’ll drop it frustrated. The story and fighting feels weak. This story is only good because there are not any good novels at all currently hence people saying this is good. But damn logic is not used well in this book. If any reader wants to read, there’s so much forced plot, little logic in the mc, and bad guys(tusks) acting as the good guys the whole story it seems. the writing is good, worldbuiling is good, story is good but needs better logic and better thinking from mc who was a shut in his whole life and probably read solo leveling. So he should have went the army route but doesn’t which contradicts his ability. Even at the start he said he plans to swarm the enemy but doesn’t actively take steps for it. Ehh Read it or don’t. But I guarantee you will be annoyed by the story. Which might make you drop it which I support in dropping.

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