Review Detail of Felhavon in A Certain Pokemon Shop(Re-Write)

Item: A Certain Pokemon Shop(Re-Write)
Rating: 4.2

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FelhavonLv45mthFelhavon

Interesting so far. The writing style seems a bit, immature?, is how'd I'd put it but amusing nonetheless. The flashbacks near the start were a bit much but overall the slice of life aspects were nice to read. This type of story needs really frequent updates or you'll lose the interest of the readers as it seems a bit difficult to just hop back into. Just my opinion. Thanks!

A Certain Pokemon Shop(Re-Write)

LazyWriterZ

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FelhavonLv4Felhavon

You have for sure. If it was bad I'd call it as it is, you have something pretty decent with room for improvement. Keep it up!

LazyWriterZ:Mhm... I'll try my best!thank you for this nice review!I'm actually still new to this, and I'm also not a Native English speaker so it's a bit hard for me sometimes..I hope I did improve tho- even if just a little bit.

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LazyWriterZAuthorLazyWriterZ

Mhm... I'll try my best!thank you for this nice review!I'm actually still new to this, and I'm also not a Native English speaker so it's a bit hard for me sometimes..I hope I did improve tho- even if just a little bit.

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