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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon9d
    Commented

    Oh hell yeah! I love me some creative stories in Worm!

    The first Worm fic is something of a combination of standard Gacha system power and the Celestial Grimoire. My working title so far is: 'A Fae Gamble' (or) 'Fae Luck'. Expect parody of the grimdark/grimderp stuff, plenty of rolls/RNGjesus, and of course, goth girls (practically a given, knowing my work lol). Goth Panpan, anyone?
    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon21d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! I can't recall if he's going to be getting more templates, but it'll cool to see what gets matched up with Tobirama if so.

    A Crimson Eclipse Binds; A Lone Wanderer Unites the Fractured World
    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon21d
    Commented

    Eh, you've made his abilities super inconsistent. He's made mention of and used the ability to see everything multiple times already. I really hope that the excuse isn't something stupid like, "He was raging and didn't think of it!".

    Ch 29 Rage Unleashed
    The Super Lazy System
    Anime & Comics · Rafa_s
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon29d
    Posted

    Great story, but isn't this called "The Gaming Gear" over on FF? Unless you're Seerking.

    The Gamer's Arsenal
    Anime & Comics · Nesto_
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon29d
    Commented

    Hell yeah! King of Escalation incoming!

    After thinking for a bit, I came up with a fitting name, at least according to me. "Escalation" I suggested after thinking for a bit. They might call Taylor Hebert the Queen of Escalation, but it was Lung, who escalated in reality. The more he fought, the stronger he became, the bigger he grew, and he would keep escalating until the conflict ended one way or another… I hope escalation is not in use.
    Epic of Leviathan [REBOOT]
    Anime & Comics · InGlorious
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon1mth
    Commented

    I mean... Might be a mistake? But at the same time who wants the Joker with comedic plot armor hanging from their neck.

    I said, and with alchemy and erased Joker's body, but I didn't bother taking his soul into the medallion...
    DC: Dimensional Luck
    Anime & Comics · Sothisq
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon1mth
    Posted

    Excellent work! I kind of understand people screaming like rabid animals about the cuck stuff but... he kind of holds all the cards in the whole polyamory setup. The girls can have fun without him there but if he leaves everything would fall apart. What I really want to see is Sean in Worm. Similar concept but maybe running a shoe store in partnership with Parian, or a coffee shop, etc. The premise of Dead End Bar really lends itself to spinoffs.

    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon1mth
    Commented

    Another awesome chapter! I imagine Coil is about to have a bad time.

    Ch 28 Chapter 24
    Will of The Force (Star Wars / Worm)
    Movies · CaptaoCav
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon1mth
    Commented

    Yes

    Do you guys think it should be an all-girl members chat group with only the protagonist as the male?
    I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.
    Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Sovereign
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon3mth
    Commented
    Yes, I may not be her biological father. But I am her daddy.
    In MHA With a Dimensional Trading Quirk
    Anime & Comics · blazuki
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon3mth
    Commented

    100% a smooth way to become a technopath.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon4mth
    Commented

    Good! Nice to see characters other than MC being aware. You almost never see, "Oh, that guy seems to want to kill my friend, maybe I'll keep an eye out". It's always, "Heheh, big fight, I'm strong, no need to worry".

    Even though Ryan and his group did not notice him, someone noticed his gaze. Tsukuyomi decides to mark him and watch over him.
    The Laziest System: Sign-Up System
    Anime & Comics · Ryusenka
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! I hope he doesn't keep insisting on hiding most info from her.

    Ch 127 Chapter 127: Real-Life Time Travel Simulation! A Secret That Cannot Be Hidden!
    Danmachi: I have a Simulator!
    Anime & Comics · Novelette_Seeker
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! Kinda mixed feelings on the time travel shenanigans. MC's future is looking kind of sad?

    Ch 106 The past, the present, and the future
    Celebrity System In The DC Universe
    Anime & Comics · Level1Goblin
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon4mth
    Commented

    It's unfortunate he's just shy of being a cosmic being and this not being an issue. Pretty sure he couldn't be snapped at that point either.

    No way I was letting that shit happen, especially since I was a mutant now.
    Marvel Mutant, I’m a Burning Martian!
    Anime & Comics · EgyptianDio
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon4mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter! His character is becoming inconsistent. This is less unhinged and more angsty child which is odd with an adult mentality.

    Ch 65 Naruto Unhinged
    Naruto: I Quit
    Anime & Comics · Kitty_Loves_Milk
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon5mth
    Replied to LazyWriterZ

    You have for sure. If it was bad I'd call it as it is, you have something pretty decent with room for improvement. Keep it up!

    A Certain Pokemon Shop(Re-Write)
    Anime & Comics · LazyWriterZ
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon5mth
    Posted

    Interesting so far. The writing style seems a bit, immature?, is how'd I'd put it but amusing nonetheless. The flashbacks near the start were a bit much but overall the slice of life aspects were nice to read. This type of story needs really frequent updates or you'll lose the interest of the readers as it seems a bit difficult to just hop back into. Just my opinion. Thanks!

    A Certain Pokemon Shop(Re-Write)
    Anime & Comics · LazyWriterZ
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon5mth
    Commented

    Yes, 100%.

    Ch 13 Suggestion
    Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy
    Anime & Comics · Life_sa_Beach_
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  • Felhavon
    Felhavon5mth
    Commented
    "No.", I say and then use Shunpo to leave. Who the f*ck does he think I am, his teacher?
    The serene Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · Daoist0kxr4h
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