Review Detail of MajorLove_Gravy in Marvel: System Maker.

terrible pacing, constant spelling errors, and worst of all boring multiple bodies. I always hate stories where the mc has multiple bodies with different capabilities that don't share. it'd be different if everything shared but the base points but that isn't that case and that makes it boring. This fic straight up reminds me of young master Chinese fics and nothing interesting is really explored, hell the premise was supposed to be making systems but now mc makes them, takes over the body of the person who gets them, and then lives as that person for like 30 chapters while taking over other bodies, even in the most recent chapter mc makes a new body to get captured so his orginal body isn't but the new body has different abilities somehow