Review Detail of BlackHat in The Mage of Eternity
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It started good and I don't mind the idea of MC killing ruffians or bad people but I really do not like how he treats the brother and sister, MC became a plain Villain and for what? The MC has 10000 years to get stronger and to do so he just has to kill monsters in the wild but he would kill innocent for some golds...
The Mage of Eternity
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Yeah, the brother is basically the epitome of a "good" person. He's the only person MC should know would never betray him, plus MC benefits whenever the kid levels up. Yet MC wants to kill him because some other guy tried to kill MC? That makes no sense. Just terrible writing all around. The author wants to make MC super edgy and evil, and even tries to justify it by explaining why it makes sense for MC to try to kill innocent people for absolutely no reason, but it's all just nonsense. The story has decent potential, but I don't think the author's up to writing a good story. Plus, the MTL editor is absolute trash, so there's really not much reason to read this one.
dylan_pyle:the are no innocents just because your brain washed does not mean everyone else is
Inevitron:Yeah, the brother is basically the epitome of a "good" person. He's the only person MC should know would never betray him, plus MC benefits whenever the kid levels up. Yet MC wants to kill him because some other guy tried to kill MC? That makes no sense. Just terrible writing all around. The author wants to make MC super edgy and evil, and even tries to justify it by explaining why it makes sense for MC to try to kill innocent people for absolutely no reason, but it's all just nonsense. The story has decent potential, but I don't think the author's up to writing a good story. Plus, the MTL editor is absolute trash, so there's really not much reason to read this one.